Julia Webb, 2 March, 2020
Before launching into Threat, Julia briefed us on her setting for what became
a totally absorbing read – small town with communities from different
backgrounds merged in uncomfortable proximity. Her own family a London
overspill.
‘Meet me at Hide Out, Hideyhole, Hidden,
our own little kingdom.’
‘Bus Station Toilets’ was an arresting start with its wordplay, and complicit
teenage wickedness. Through banding and xenophobia, youngsters were
initiating their identity, and the poem’s slightly staccato lists of ‘forbiddens’
pulled the audence in.
Both first and final readings (‘All the Women’) were supplied with
epigraphs, suggesting a good deal of familiarity with current poetry that
underlies a superficially ‘easy’ read. Much new poetry is political and a little
dry. Julia imbues her politics with surreal overtones to powerful effect.
‘but the women, the women
they are building their bakeries inside me…
they are replacing my blood with confectioner’s custard
and icing the insides of my breasts’
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The theme was not only lucrative, it was employed in a variety of ways. Wiki
suggests that Yehuda Amichai (1924-200) was Israel’s greatest modern poet.
He is translated in 40 different languages, and his ‘Diameter of the Bomb’
(trans. Ted Hughes ) is a stunning example of how much a poem can say.
Thanks to Maureen for this.
Elizabeth Bishop was another high-flyer, and one reason for enjoying her
poems so much is the touch of humour that can accompany an otherwise
devastating argument. Helen read her well-known sestina ‘One Art’.
Both Lumleys used humour / black humour. John’s black holes, & zip wires
& being scared & generation relationships all in one and a quarter pages of
lyric verse (Perceived Threat’). Sally’s ‘Howells Butcher’ contained the
hilarious stanza:
“Morning Mrs Lumley”
He moves a little closer,
Luring me onto his wooden chipping bench.
Leg or shoulder, or a bit of breast?” ‘
In Peter’s ‘The Phone lay curled on itself like a Cat in the Hall’, it’s the
juxtaposition of domestic and international that really sparks. Sally H’s
riddling ‘What am I’ (which no one solved) ends with a boisterous stanza:
‘While ubiquitous I’m unobtrusive
So am I sinister? You bet!
My insidious encroachment is inclusive
I am a massive threat!’
The poem reminds me of a Radio news comment in the last few days that a
considerable section of youngsters worry about climate change.
I like the unobtrusive rhyming of Bob Ward’s ‘The Beasts’: Quite often.. I
fabricate,/ in fancy at the verge of truth,/ a beast, three horned, outside my
room / snorting against the matchboard walls.
But Briony’s ‘My young heart’ heads the ‘drama’ section with a young-love
infatuation that packs a lot of power in its final stanza, each line starting ‘I
heard you…’
Evelyn’s ‘On meeting for young men on the allotment path’ .. suggests that
even walking past someone can be thick with menace. I wanted to title the
poem simply ‘Hello’. John R’s bus-top cogitations composed en route to a
Hospital Urinary Dept. with a load of young fellow-travellers made some
deft quatrains from an image a window might have reflected. ‘Gurgling old
trout’ is lovely!
Michael’s threat was a snake, when out walking in Southern California. ‘That
Rattle’ responded well to his additional sound effects. Pippa’s ‘Accidental
Death Of A Botanist’ was an almost unbelievable story/poem from Surrey
where ‘sandy tracts/ made innocent/ by years of military installations/ might
yet reveal/ hidden foliations’
A large number of Hardy’s poems would have fit our theme. To hear Nigel
reading is always a pleasure.